Wednesday, 28 November 2018
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I liked the way you showed that it was night and changing to day through the blue background. You taught me how to change the time by changing the colour of the background. Next time you could add something like a plane or something like that just so that it's not so plain. From Jackson
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made the sun
ReplyDeleteDid you think about making the slide more interesting?
Next time you could make it longer.
Why did you choose to do make a slide about the moon and the sun?